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Old 08-26-06, 05:36 PM   #16
DaTrusHurtz
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Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
I feel this punch was worded a bit too statementish and ya coulda easily fixed that. Good concept tho, just not that harsh

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
would be okay, but i'd seen this concept before a bunch times even before aeral posted the links
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
structure of this confused me at first... i used a flip the bird punch awhile ago, but this one was much better than the one i wrote, good shit

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
nice feed, hits hard

Good battle here, both of you had a weaker punch, but then a really nice punch. I got Aeral slightly edgin' this tho with the dope feed.

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