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|  09-01-06, 10:34 AM |  #16 | ||||
| The Alien Toung 
 
 | IP:  i forgot about this........... ok peace...............always loved this beat............. quality is kinda fuzzy........need better noise reduct........and ur flows kinda choppy...proly something to do with how u write.......and most ppl not gona see past that to hear the lyrics....witch dont seem bad actualy,...cant really understand the hook...that quality thing again....can tell ur telling a story, but u need to eccentuate [spelling] ur words more..up delevery a bit man , emotions not bad tho....flows not off but like i said, not real smooth...seems like u feel wut ur saying but need to b more comforable on the mic maybe 1ne and leady....thats cool...but idk why u'd come in a thread to anounce that... 
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