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Beauty
The oyster and pearl
Perfectly shaped, wonderfully made
Closed to the world, holding a treasure
Designed with precision
Radiant life abounding from all sides
That which is rooted within
Displayed externally
Socially, emotionally, spiritually, physically
Corrupted by the physical
Twisted by sight
Lacking acknowledgment of the pearl
Becomes unlikely to fully blossom
The treasure remains hidden
Concealed by the seen
Death takes the external
A hidden treasure finally found
Forever existent
Only now discovered
The oyster superficially seen
The pearl casually overlooked
A waste of Beauty