Hey, I'm new on the site, and i thought i'd show you one of the sides to me. (the soft and gentle side ladyz if your reading ;-)

O yes, I saw sweet beauty in her face,
Such a kind smile full of love and grace.
A love untouched by the devil's hands,
With I poised close to grab as she stands.
Is it wrong to want what is undeser'ved to thee?
Is it improper to beg, promise and plea?
The answer I know is incomplete,
However, simple and complex, without deceit.
I so wish to know the softness of her touch
Running over my heart ever so much.
The smell of her hair makes me ponder everyday,
Such that I've been thrown into disarray.
Thou cannot imagine the excitement I feel,
Of something so far and yet so real.
I hope to one day find the answers to my thoughts,
And not to end up unknowing and distraught.
This message summed up is as follows,
I can't wait till we meet and what you don't like can be swallowed.


Its a bit of a crap last line i know, but have you any ideas on how i can improve the last line?