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|  09-23-06, 06:49 PM |  #16 | ||||
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 | IP:  listening wordz : beat was alright,damn who did the hook?...it needed a lil more work cos idk i wasnt feeling it..i cud barely get what was said on it...ur verse..yeah u stayed on focus bruh,ur flow wasnt at its best cos u slipped off it a lil...th hook just gave u a minus on this..too many voices on it...shudnt have sang!aww mayne... willa : yeh yeah i like the intro idea,u got a nice voice..but apart from that word to ur flow,nice breathe control,i was feeling ur verse it hit like err1 and not on just mum like wordzahGod,yeah ur hook was a nice and quite melodic and cool effect on it... v : willa 
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