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Old 10-13-06, 03:32 PM   #16
J. Luth
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This fake aint known, for heavens sake get owned
Cuz Ripple drown ya ass til ya struggle and make ya own
Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class
And ya girl loves ta fuck me, she's never gettin fed-up
So i'll give ya girl a bone like...
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Fucka fake personal after see'in that please disregard my earlier set up!
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
This baffling hoe's got bags under her eyes, i'd creep right by her
But if I was dating you I wouldn't be able to sleep at night either
You shy now? Dun' worry I also take what I can get whenever I browse
And i'm sure she really floats ya boat with those paddle lookin eyebrowse
But even your girl ignores ya, I doubt she's takin your time
The only way'd you'd get a lap dance is by shakin your thighs
I got pride, you suck D, not to mention that this guy is ugly
So don't gimme any lip! Or you won't have any left to hide ya buck teath
And fuck working a job i'll take the reward for saving our folk
Cuz I swear Osama might be hiding inside that cave in his nose
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance
She's rockin those black bags, are you clockin her man?
I'm sure you tried to Popeye... wich also explains why she's rockin his chin

(24)

v.s.

I checked RV's HOF, n' bitch u'll get slapped fast
Legends never die?
... LEGENDS SHOULDN'T NEED HALF A YEAR TO MAKE A CHAMP MATCH
25 fuckin' battles? Ur not a threat, queer
Neil Armstrong coulda went to the moon in the time it took u to get here
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
I'll set this shit straight, u rip lines from Resin n' greats,
Ur so under the influence, ur verses wobble all over the place
Ewwwwww Jack, ur gruesome, n' RV, this dude's done
My opponent last week was at a baby shower...
... my one this week could use one
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
'm no fan of this gay, see i'm bein' candid today
Ya girl is so prop'd up, she could be a trash can in a play
I glanced at ur girl's bed, n' that bitch's yellin' in grieve
Cuz she bought a comforter... just to fuckin' tell u to Leave!
You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on
See I'm rippin' these queers, ya hoe's been consumin' some tears
With such fuckin' bug eyes, she could feed Timon and Pumbaa for years
(20)

This was a long ass read but dope..... JTR was pretty consistent. Had some dope lines. my two personal faves were the feature one and stroke one those were ill. While DTH came out with flames, I thought he took it seriously. From that first section before pic. so dope really. Then after that he fell off a little, picked it up a lot in end. But that middle section was ehhh to me. My favs were your first 2 lines on him taking to long and the baby shower. lmao those were ill. Overall tho this was an ill champ match. The 60 lines helped. But uhh JTR was more consistent, iunno I guess DTH didn't expect the 60 so after a while he kinda started slippin'. But overall, ill battle props to both. enjoyed the read a lot.

v/JTR
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