well, the flow started out pretty raw.... but kinda got less good... haha less good.
it seemed like u tried to go jay on the first verse, then nas on the second...
hahaha u did two unibrow lines.... i'd give more props on the flow than the lyrics. i think the first couple bars in the first flow were nice but the second verse didnt follow up well. but yeah, next time just put this in the song forum. i mean, whats wrong wit followin the rules, sonny boy?
btw, now you're not the only non-wack person in this thread.