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Old 12-25-06, 01:08 PM   #16
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i guess that's how you roll, ure tactics are exposed on set
and now i'm feelin' ripped off.. but without actually biting that concept
ure opinion means nothin, get set for a god-like drummin
'coz u told me Ahgod is trash..
.. so it must burn you 'coz a god impregnated ure woman
kid can't handle this, its why he's never stepped to me
'coz i'd buck roger'so hard i'd fuckin annihilate the 25th century

i heard final's like one of those clown toys in how girls reject his cock
except u ain't got to wind him up to see his head fly out a box
kid always gets rocked with shots, so don't be shocked when i floor him
'coz he's such a hack every computer nerd is desperate for him
i've seen this guy wireless around, dudes got double the clout
he reps bluetooth on his ear, and fucking yellow ones in his mouth
good battlers like competition and they caught a glimpse of this geek
and thats wireless amount of dope heads sign up each week
we got a new champ.. but even john'll get ripped see
'coz Hen a see the kind of punches comin' that'd make a guy tipsy



Vs.


MaRVjay, your on the list dawg, coz strobe had em all wrong
Coz this fags requesting to pinkslip---->into pumps and a small thong

Ur old news like yesterdays paper even the cypher digress
Coz This kid bites enough lines to write a weekly Digest
So you better Take me out your sig fam, I dont mess with bitches
But I will drop Marv a link...then drag him by his legs with it
So forget it nigga Im done with this wak fuck
And not to be racist, but blacksilence...N' I really wanna keep it as such

Im kneeing your nutts, so cry You fuckin' ashy bastard
'Coz lotion keeps em 3yrs younger--->then the boys he's usually chasing after
And Stick and stones may hurt, yeah but wordz'll blow his ribs
Coz I browse the net, while he's too black for you to notice his

And Native, he's wak but atleast he admits that he knows
COz feeding is like girls he admires, none'll ever eat @ joes
Make em bleed out the nose, uppercut em through heavens free sanction
Then drop em back to hell, low enough to see his own league ranking
So starv yourself, do something productive for the league son
'COz if you join you'll just be Stanzas crutch, coz he's about to need one

I liked both verses, it's a creative event and you gys didn't fail, the reason I voted for Nick is because he had only a bit more creativity I'll bold what I think was most creative in both verses...The "Hen a see" line was pretty good I liked it alot so that kinda what had me make my descision the verses were pretty even though I liked both.

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Last edited by Vitticus : 12-25-06 at 01:48 PM.
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