Yeah, this open mic forum does shit. Nobody here drops anything half decent. And nobody gives feedback. All I have to say is you better hope that you have a decent beat for that. Style reminded me of 50-cent or somethin. It flowed well throughout but there was no real good sign of actual writing or deep meaning... blah. I'd have to hear it on audio to judge..

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