boberic-bad opener, sry, but it didnt even regard to this topic...i felt like the lines were way too long adn you were just tryin to fit as much info in each on as possible, however this completely jacks up the flow....some stuff didnt make sense also (ex:he wishes he'd get raped, in order to go to the shower?)...you did have some good werdplay tho

i.e.-haha...funny shit...a little bit of digresssion but funny nonetheless...good flow...opener wasnt that great...decent closer...nice rhyme schemes...alot of funny punches (they want your number to place and order of chinese food)

i.e. took this battle in just about all the categories...

v/i.e. hypocrisy