tebo-wasnt feelin opener or closer but in between was pretty good...some lines werent very strong but some others made up for it...only other thing i see wrong is that some stuff seems forced...even tho the lines were long, flow still went good

out-good opener and closer but in between wasnt as strong....stayed on the gay subject too long, his was relevant since youre the trojans but ducks really dont have much t do with sex lol...but this verse was still decent

close battle

v/tebo