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04-09-07, 09:54 PM | #2 | |
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overall I could follow the story... But you need to work on not using such basic rhymes.. dead/head dam/cam route/out it just makes the verse too basic... It flows/sounds a lot better when u use multis ex. Just hop on the beats they nick name me "beat rider"/ Sonic boomin on lames like guile in "street fighter." that was just a quick example off the top of my head but its an example none the less.
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