Axe- i was feelin pretty much ya whole verse. Opener was a dope concept worded a little roughly but still descent. The rest of ya verse was good, basically above par. overall wordplay was great. I liked ya closer as well LOL. overall not bad man.

Show-your verse was good as well man. i liked most of ya verse. i think you started off badly, and then picked it up after ya first 4 bars. I just basically wasn't feelin the beginnin. You had some pretty clever wordplay as well. overall decent verse.


i'm gon go with Axe for a more consistent verse.

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