http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^Click on "iLL Concerns"


Beat: Timeless Beats
Hook: Tha Q
Verses: 1-3 Tha Q (verse 3 is only 8 bars to allow room for one more run of the hook)

Concept: I wanted this track to represent a lyrical venting session...ill concerns...I'm spitting what's on my mind, but still maintaining ill schemes.

Hook: Sing-rap combo (1x)

There are times I get lost, but God finds me
There are times I get...confused, when nobody
Is there to show me love...there, to hold me up
Will you, be the one to believe I can be, anything, I can see

While singing the layers of the hook, I get pitchy (out of tune) occasionally...But, I feel the overall sound/feel of the joint is hot.

Also, if you hadn't noticed, the beginning of verse three is completely off-kilter...I'm being facetious there...I'm basically saying rappers who spit lines like that are single-handedly killing rap.

Holla


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