It was bad but not that bad. The thought and feeling were good but the flow sucked. I couldnt catch it for shit. maybe you should try using bars in between verses. I couldnt cypher them out.Also you seemed like you were struggling at the end. your wordplay and vocab started slipping. all in all I give it a 6/10. Keep spittin homy

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