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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-31-07, 08:00 AM
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cool piece, good with the multies, and it all worked, wasn't just going with the rhyming.. would've been nice if it was longer, but i guess its hard with this style, but its not like the length took away from the piece at all.. good stuff, great closing lines too.. if i had to complain about anything, it was hard to read with the color, lol
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