was workin on this today got 20 lines done tell me what yall think....~1~


cant even sit down and relax my mind.....
without feeling the tense animosity attacking from behind......
many speak about me...many watch me closely...
these antagonistic individuals conspire to fold me....
in bisects and visualize me immobilize and collapse....
collide into a callous pavement hoping i wont survive the impact....
im being pressured to reach a higher bearing and still keep my sanity....
but these adversaries make it hard to breath they creep in stradegy......
they all want to challenge me... pin me to floors in submission.....
whether right or wrong im forced to make decisions....
time maneuvers expeditiously on a course against the opposition.....
it is my intention to triumph over these hordes of abomination....
and escape the afflictive amoral ways of my foes....
theses days i grow old and weary.... these rivals hatred gotta go.....
im suprised ive made it this far equiped for the next confrontation....
i stand in my high defensive position waiting for my assailants elevation.....
i got the words and strength to counterattack like counterinsurgency....
those who wanna corner me will get dealt with like burglary.....
and when the final contentions are over i'll wave a banner in victory......
proving my will to succeed over the standards of infamy....


my links......

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244067
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244057

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