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Old 07-16-08, 01:19 AM   #11
Lay.
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I'm gonna come over your house n pimp slap you if you dont' finish your verse for our collab son. Anyways..


Mr. Imagery is at it again..you actually painted a picture in my head as I read through it which takes some talent. That alone impressed me, it told a decent story..kept me reading. I like the rhyme scheme you use, its perfect for your style.. it caps off each line nicely an you fill them with good vocab an well thought out words to keep the imagery on point. Good shit man, rtf.
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