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01-07-09, 02:43 AM | #3 | ||
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Damn...even the Open Mic section is dead..
All right, Some rhymes were forced here. Like the unique/12 feet part and the swollen answers/rode Mathers. Also, ease up on the whole sex with people's mother thing. I'd rate this verse a 6.5/10...more originality is needed. My main advice, work on originality and subject matter first, and then the multis second. |
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