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Old 02-14-09, 07:23 PM   #10
J.Roy
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Yessir, thanks a lot guys. Well I was kinda trying to be monotone on this since it's more of a commercial thing but I guess it didn't work in my favor, I don't care enough bout this to re-record with more emotion though haha. And aight thanks for letting me know the vocals are too loud, I'll remember that for my next track.

As for a better mic, im only getting one of those eventually along with the rest of my audio software I need to record better... and I don't mix my shit, don't know how, i'll learn eventually but til then my tracks got no mixing lol

how's the flow guys?

And thanks for all the criticism cheyah

And yes I'm Russian/Jew on my dads side and Irish/Scottish on my moms



I've noticed more underground shit is monotone than commercial. Typically the reason the rappers are mainstream are because of their Delivery+Flow. But this shit is pretty boring, like it really didn't bring me into it. Delivery is something you want to work on if you're trying to something commercial. Flow was okay, but you should def work on quality and delivery. That's the biggest thing.
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