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Old 03-29-03, 02:46 AM   #1
Tha Linez Drawn
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A true element of tha street never needs your critique...
He stays solid like concrete beneath your feet, completely...
unfazed by your ability to throw your trash an' walk on...
when cement is wet it's impressionable...but dry, it's solidity is never Questionable...so what you express to me is a meager wisdom you shouldn't talk on...
You didn't have your hands on this man when he bagan with his plan...
you weren't there to advise how to take tha prize or excape demise...
I'd understand if you were my teacher, but when I was a concreter...you had diapers and mom beat cha'...so now you overstretched your arms to catch a cheetah...
While Micheal Jordan was figurin' how many ways he could put a ball in a basket...I was figurin' how many ways I could put an MC in a casket...
While you wonder how these long lines can fit inside some beats...that's a secret I'mal keep...
until I have 40 students unleashed in tha streets...or 'til I'm six feet deep...'cause everyday tha mode of death is on creep...
but what is certain, no MC that's hiding behind a curtain, puttin' garbage work in...could ever take me if I was burpin'...
You want me to come down to your level...when I passed that when I was twelve...you don't know tha difference between tha brake and gas pedal...so you can't drive arguements into the topics I delve...
you besta keep your comments to yourself, otherwise it'll be bad for your health...and out a job, it'll make problems for your wealth...
tha journey to tha depths of hell, could be a shorter trip, as well...the only difference will be how hard you fell!!!

your critiques actually show me your weak, unless your on tha level I speak...because:

My worst approach is...better than you cockroaches...
even if I sneeze an' don't cover my nose.
If I only breathe heavy, you'll know who tha coach is...
an' I suppose, you'll never be ready for pros...
with minimum prose...I never fully display my flows

ya'll just don't know how I draw tha linez...and if you don't know just say you don't know...instead of opening your mouth, and saying something while acting like a scholar...embarassing yourself.
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