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04-01-03, 07:27 PM | #1 | |
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!!!!!!!!!!!!lil verse-sum feed back pleaze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ma shit mo lethal den a loaded deuce clip// and ma flow iz so grimy it make pussy seem sick// i spit dez metaphores wit great precision// ma flow so nasty it make pussy seem delicious// God put me on da earth 2 cause destruction// ma brain iz lyke a chemistry experiment, mix sum metaphores and similes and theres an erruption// i sip hypno, hennesy, and bun mad trees// and lyrically i cure ma enemies of STD's// 2 many emcees have da Shit Talkers Disease// but its all good, cuz play will lowa dey self-esteem// lyrically im inclined 2 spit terrible descibles// ma shit iz lyke food poison it aint fuckin eatible// i spit dis shit wit nuff drastic tactics// slingin dez rhymez lyke dey fuckin elastics// ma flow iz nastier den pussy wit cancer// once da nines start poppin, i leave dez fools lookin lyke dancers// now imma end dis shit in a unique way// id lyke 2 close by sayin fuck yall and have a nice day// i bit da ending frum 8 mile only cuz i couldnt think of a good ending but besides dat i thought ma verse wuz iight, wat yall think? holla @ me! |
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