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Old 04-01-03, 07:27 PM   #1
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!!!!!!!!!!!!lil verse-sum feed back pleaze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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check dis out!

ma shit mo lethal den a loaded deuce clip//
and ma flow iz so grimy it make pussy seem sick//
i spit dez metaphores wit great precision//
ma flow so nasty it make pussy seem delicious//
God put me on da earth 2 cause destruction//
ma brain iz lyke a chemistry experiment, mix sum metaphores and similes and theres an erruption//
i sip hypno, hennesy, and bun mad trees//
and lyrically i cure ma enemies of STD's//
2 many emcees have da Shit Talkers Disease//
but its all good, cuz play will lowa dey self-esteem//
lyrically im inclined 2 spit terrible descibles//
ma shit iz lyke food poison it aint fuckin eatible//
i spit dis shit wit nuff drastic tactics//
slingin dez rhymez lyke dey fuckin elastics//
ma flow iz nastier den pussy wit cancer//
once da nines start poppin, i leave dez fools lookin lyke dancers//
now imma end dis shit in a unique way//
id lyke 2 close by sayin fuck yall and have a nice day//

i bit da ending frum 8 mile only cuz i couldnt think of a good ending but besides dat i thought ma verse wuz iight, wat yall think?

holla @ me!
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