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just a pair of tracks i'm working on, thought i'd shove em both in here for the sake of giving a decent length.

you aint shit.

stop fucking lying, you aint a gritty g/
your skills are more underdeveloped than mini me, i pity thee/
i spot you in clubs try'na get into drawers/
but you'd have more success try'na chat up walls/
standing there with a grim face like a squad of wonder men/
i'd give you a 0 on a scale of 1-10/
closet case, drink of choice, bicardii breezer/
and the only ice you own is in your fucking freezer/
your 1-2 mic cheque is as high as you can count/
the number of records sold and the ammount in your account/
plus your eyes are glazed over like you met a temptress/
so things for you look more bleak than memphis/

headfuck

(hook)
if the girl leading you on, you believing whats wrong/
or your boys creeping up on, your girl when you're gone/
situations jump out at you, make you get stuck/
it aint nothing but a headfuck/

(verse 1)
heres an example of how your life gets dismantled/
get swept off your feet like a rug planted and pulled/
i recall a young missy by the name of ruth/
kept a straight face when telling lies, same for truth/
she was my first queen, ma cherie, mi amour/
the kind of girl i would run to the furthest store for/
pulled me out of depression, snapped me out of aggression/
it was a very hard lesson when the girl started stressin'/
see, i knew she was religious but not to what degree/
said sex was off limits til you stop and marry me/
figured i could talk her out of it, but the plot thickens/
when she told me the newsflash, thought i would drop kittens/
a little thing, my gran reads tea leaves and the future/
when i told this info, ruth turned and abused her/
said "its the devil whispering secrets, i know too well/
and you and your whole family and going to hell"/

(hook)


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