this is the second verse to a song Im workin on called "Tears of the Mic", the first is "The Lonely Mic" if anyone has any ideas on a hook i would appreciate it

I dont mean most of this shit dogg, just venting


have you ever been betrayed and some shit/
have you ever considered slittin ur wrist/
well if so...this song is for you....checkit yo....yo/
....yo the tears drop outta the pen/
and again, the ink spills my pent/
up rage and anger, life's turned gay and stranger/
everyday I hang'a/
lil closer off the edge/
yeah right......best friends my nuts/
what are you nuts/
was it worth it...to give it up/
cuz faggot im this close to fuckin you up/
but this bitch is too pussy-whipped to get pistol-whipped/
by my dick so im just gonna have to let this shit/
go for now even though/
(mocking "Dawson's Creek" theme song "I dont want to wait")
"I dont wanna wait for this bitch to step up to me
I want to start swingin riight now
makin fuckin paint stains in his panties yeah
this fag is just all sorts of confused"
I see u've made ur descision, well listen cuz Ive made one as well/
with ur half ass rhymes, ur an all ass rapper/
sendin' ur lyrics straight down the fuckin crapper/
so stop tryin' to be me/
cuz u suck, u are not a real emcee/
but I dont blame you/
I would turn my back on my best friend too/
for a hippie-slut who'd give it up in less then a month/
she is not worth her FUCK-IN CUNT/
bros before hos my FUCK-IN NUTS/
so let me forever clear the static off my mic/
and try to clear this faggot off my mind/
so now its only me, lonely me, left a foresaken emcee/
wont be long 'fore my pen and my pad turn their back against me/
and thats all folks/
and thats all.