this is jus a lil quick song i wrote, hopin 2 get sum feedback...peace

chorus:
neva give up, keep to it, keep ya feet on tha ground
as long as ya head is high, dont let nobody keep u down
even if u poor, no one likes u, r ur hated by tha town
keep in mind,dat until u go flat, tha wheels go round n round......

i was nothin, a ghetto baby, born inta this world ful a hate
a little boy wit hate n anger, one day decied im a retaliate
look at me now DADDY, went from nuthin to one of tha greats
lik i went fishin yo, smart n used my future as my bait
i was all alone in dis world kickin up dust where there was gold
lik i was siitn in a heatin vent, but culdnt help to stay cold
i was determined to fullfil my destiny yo, i wasnt goin mold
then suddenly my life started crumblin to these endless floors
tried to get my self 2 getha, but i was hidin behind open doors
cryin myself 2 sleep each night,only 2 wake up to a dark sided sun
every day of my lif was tha same, 1 step closa to loadin da gun
but i swept up my life,i cleaned up, with the broom of destiny
even though my uncle died, his determination will rest in me
dats why i held on to my words, cause i speak in tru perspective
tha devil jus through a full-yard pass,& god helped me intercept it
yo i neva gave up, i stuck wit da plan, ended up on da top
i done neva abandoned my family, i will neva jus staight up drop
afta tha fire is done burnin, i still will only trust my friends i neva gave up, through da rain, i stuck it through til tha end
even if u poor as hell lik me sleepin in tha parkin lot of a ramada
u make ur own footsteps in life yo, and thats why u gotta....

chorus:
neva give up, keep to it, keep ya feet on tha ground
as long as ya head is high, dont let nobody bring u down
even if ur poor,no one likes u, r ur hated by tha town
keep in mind,dat until u go flat, tha wheels go 'round n 'round