Ok... let me set something straight... Vote: Rise... but not for what everyone else is saying...


the vertical hole line was stupid... There is no way to fall into a vertical unless you trip... or you are pushed or some force moves you into it... vertical is up and down... that's why I think you are mediocre... for small mistakes like that... had you said horizontal... I'd have been like... damn nice line... but you won simply because kid got outpowered...


um... whatever that kids name is... had the sea fag/scally wag line... pretty good...


Rise: You're best line... was the 8 general line... that there was classic... props on that... now if you came up with more of those lines... I wouldn't say you were mediocre and only had 65% of hard lines... hey the flow was a little off though... in some parts... seemed like you tried to fit to much in...


small suggestion... worry about punches and wordplay... that's what wins battles... multi don't do shit but make the flow better... oh and make it a reason for herbs to vote for you... it's the truth...


Good job...