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Perfection=Complex=Content (my best drop yet)
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i tried to make it so u could read it how its meant to be said, sort of in three portions for each line, each portion rhymes with its pairs same portion and tha middle portion moving on to be tha first of tha 3rd line and so on. this was my attempt to be complex and still tell tha content i wanted to, tell me if i did
To reach-goals ~ elevation ~ must-occur, Defeat-holes that ~ on occasion ~ rust-your-words, All tha devastation ~ of thoughts ~ is our-enemy, Our imagination ~ contorts ~ with sour-guarantees, We’ll be distraught ~ imprecise ~ when-we-spit, And getting caught ~ in-tha-lies ~ envy-writ, It’d-be-nice ~ if perfection ~ came-easy, I-despise ~ glut complexion ~ tha games-tease-me, Tha intersection ~ of-2-worlds ~ idea-and-scheme, Misdirectin’ ~ untrue-words ~ via-wrong-meaning, Confused-“verbs” ~ not-“acting” ~ quite-proper, Misused-by-herbs ~ caught-lacking ~ contrite-offers, Thoughts-cracking ~ in through ~ tha-multies-and-vocab, Allot-facts-being ~ construed ~ not-faulty-or-so-bad, Exhumed-from ~ their grave ~ tha stone pushed aside, What gloom-on ~ their page ~ when alone with their mind, Amazed by ~ a chronicle ~ of an unright-life, Feel tha shockwave of ~ an atomic-pile ~ type-of-device, Ebonics-filled ~ scriptures ~ of power-and-heat, And ironical ~ pictures ~ can devour-tha-street, Listeners get ~ engulfed ~ in tha essence, Ministers are ~ appalled ~ by tha lessons, Not called on ~ to preach ~ to their audience, They resolve to spit ~ great speech ~ and embody-It, They don’t-teach ~ only paint ~ vivid-scenes, And outreach ~ to taint ~ wicked-dreams, Their faint ~ simple-ness ~ is not tha issue, It’s their disdain and ~ willingness ~ to reach out and hit-you |
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