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Old 06-05-03, 02:10 PM   #1
WORD~PERFECT
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please critique i need it bad

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i aint trying to be discriminent-but rappers couldnt amount to me if they bite what i write in incriments-NONCENTZ INCRIMINENT with a skill indiginous-deliverence with baligerence-you'd think i had dandruff being surrounded by all these flakes in the buissness-

a binary linguis-let words-take meaning like verbs- the react to an action, you in trouble- deliver punchlines so viscious in battles contenders either surrender or ask for stunt doubles-

i serve a pargraph of sentences like i served a bid-rip m.c.'s ass holes behind bars like inmates did-except metaphorically lietarally your cd was only hot if i listened to the adlibs-

i'll be the illset alive even after i died-the artist your scientific raps try to clone,but end up looking identically gay like MOBY and JAMORQUIE-

this kids spits monoxide- flows that recreate NOAH'S ARK-you wouldnt fill space between lines if you was double parked-NONCENTZ from the WARLORDS sparked-embarked-with so many hyms on my mind my hair line develop stretch marks-

part shwartenaeger on a mic path for termination-got nigguz counting down my release date like probation-

my mind is squirrel with a complex... cause im going nuts-on mics rappers buck alot but in life dont spit hot.... murder me!???? that's like taking body shots from a beer mug between "A" cups-

it takes me ten million ways to die and im still godly-36 bars is like 36 pressure points periods to sentences that verbally flatline your body-

a cross between herohetoe with ego of van diesel-a LANCER of flow spit 8 like an EVO-you aint racen against time or my rhymes mijo-

2 sides to the humain brain and insain mine mind a monstrosity-murder animosity in more stages then pages for the icluid and odyssey-

get charged with no energizer-use rappers as an apitizer-and flatten them like oprah on a tummysizer-
flip scripts in capitol meaning twist caps, wigs, skullies, and visors- the cd parentol advisor-warning i see more BUSCH then ANHEISER-

ripping haters on cross faders-the slayer-you couldnt spit hot if you gave head to flamers-

no era-when i inflict terra-on opposions whom oppose-make periods come out they nose-with lines this dope.
shit on the world...that's how i dump on my foes-

Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 06-05-03 at 02:31 PM.
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