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Old 06-06-03, 03:31 AM   #1
redragon
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Akwordz and Dynamic~im~maulin~u~chicks~stop baulin~u~b^ch~im awesome~with ~this~thats~y~u~stallin~with~spits Im~ballin~with~Sig~N~we~cumin~with ~hits~thats~splittin~wigs~N~at~the~same~time~got cha~girls~swallowin~kids
Sig~N~Dev like babys with clef~"Akwordz"~we~not~takin~no~Lip~ but~we~break~ya~Ribs~N~taste~em~quick~N~Dynamic is like a toilet the~way~he~keeps~taking~our~sh%t..(known bitter)

~Man That Was Whack Lets Spark things Up A Bit~

I gotta "cold" so when i spit im "sick" with words...im as smart as it gets don't confuse it kuz ima " Pro" with "Verbs"... 1 (thats my crew)

~That Was Whack Huh?~(lol)~

Dynamic and Akwordz are plannted in front of " Us" claming to be "Raw" but they just fresh "Meat" We had For "Lucnh"... 2(therer crew name is Raw)
Kids ya punches don't "exsist" there "invisible" so we can be "touched' ima kinda hungray so ima kill u cats before "Noon" call it an early "Brunch"... 3
U Kats are sweeter than "Candy Bars" and its time to "Crunch" ,Tlm knows this battle is outta "Reach"~N~im takin out cha "Teeth" so there's no need to "Brush"... 4 (the candy bar crunch and the tooth paste reach)
This is a "Battle" u cats are thirsty but u got not time for "Punch" i'll Rattle ya Teeth Dynamic .."Why" cuz u"Bit"2 Much... 5 (thristy the drink pucnh(haha)Dynamic known bitter)
Akwordz ya name explains it all now its time 2 "Hush" "ProVerbs" ain't got the same "Blood" but we still a "Brady Bunch"... 6 (brady bunch not same blood only related through marriage)
Dynamic reminds me of a "Eminem Groupie" ur just a "Shady Slut"about this battle call it "abstinace" kuz i just don't give a "f*ck"... 7 (quadruple met4)

Move Dev~N~Sig ha we the "Bank" u ain't got no account so u can't "Budget"... 8
This is a battle with "p%ssies" ima male "Nempho" u guys are "Fucked"and i "Love IT"... 9(nemhp person who loves to f*ck)

Dynamics a "Pig" with "Balls" he's ridin Signikants sack so much we call him a "Ball Hog"... 10
~N~Akwords Thinks he can f*ck with our "sh%t" just kuz he chooses to "Play~N~Stalls"... 11
We Got This Battle "ON Lock" like Lockers~N~Halls" and~n~this Bout Ya'll 2 "Standin" on thin "Air" So u Boud To 'Fall"...12
Wordz Of Advice Before "Yall" rhyme, make like "Bears Clapping" and "Press-Paws"... 14
Like I said before u 2 "Fresh Meat" so im "Eatin" ya "Raw" u guys are soft like "Candy" and im "Breakin Ya Jaw"... 13(Jaw breakers)
Im knockin ya off ya Feet.. now ya defyin "Gravity" so call me 2pac cuz im yelling f*ck the "Law"... 15(the law of gravity)
Sig said " i got my audience see'in AKWORD A-LOSINS (illusions) im stick my bozack in yea eyes and say f*ck what cha "Saw"... 16
Akwords~N~Dynamics spitin with "Flaws"we beatin this cat's so "Hard" we got da crowd going "AHH".... 17
Im "Slicin" with "Saws"so when "Limbs Fall OFF" don't be "Appalled"(SHOCKED), Yall Start to spit all of a sudden everyone “Pause”.. then when Dev~N~Sig start back up u here an "Applause"... 18
Akwordz Partner Dynamics "Known to Bite" like "Unfed-Dawgs"...even ya "Pen-Gnaws”,~N~ ya still doing it Good Lawd(lord) ... 19
Dynamic I've got no Text-Flaws, while you've got more "Crooked Lines" than "Mens-Ballz!"... 20
Akwords its like im "Stealing Board Games" the way im "Ripp ya Chess-Off".... 21

~Final Blows~

Instead of throwin punches these silly faggots throwin "Vegetables" thet must love gettin there "Salads Tossed"... 22
You Cat's aint gettin NO "Votes" "Signifikants the "Pres" of Tlm so ya'll "ballads" gettin "Loss"... 23(lmmao that’s how bush won the Election his borther is the Gov. Of Florida)
Like I said above No Celebratin Ima winnin this battle at any cost so now ima make Ak and Dyn sawllow there “teeth” so there's no need to “floss” ... 24(people floss there teeth)
Dev~N~Sig cleanin house mightest well call us “Tony Danza” from that show “Whos The boss”... 25(member that tv show with that dude tony danza he was the house cleaner)
U guys are garbage with rhymes im rippin cartalige with mine im headlining “XXL” ya’ll bearly Gracin the “Sauce” (sourece aka the sauce and right now XXL is hotter kuz soruce wont put em and 50 in)




~part II~
first impression
First I'm-PRESSI(o)N
From 'Dino-mic' to tryina-bite behind the time of newbs to this site, who knew you might.. stand up again and fight?//-1
and what the f*ck is up wit Akwordz, hes like a 'NUMB RETARD' the way he 'STANDS OVER BITES'//-2
Man this is makin me feel like a DYKE the way I'm THROWIN LICKS at these p%ssies ..//-3
look at these b^ches, their lists consist of nothing but rookies//-4
multi's
Personally Dishin Multi's
Dynamic been searchin sites, ergin for a personal.. yeah u consider me a netcee in a tagteam.. the way I E-merge my terminals!//-5
I'll burn the 'criminal' with minimal remainings.. teach u who ur Gods are, like subliminal training..//-6
Your sh%t doesn't pertain-to-me, like straining-to-free, see my lines are known like address's on Main-streets..//-7
Your plain-weak, refrain-to-speech.. the game-I-teach is death when the bullet meets, I'll stop how you breathe at 'point-blank' G, like 'drowning-in-bleach'..//-8
I'm clowning-this-'chief'..... 'reddin ya skin' till ya flesh pores-bleed//-9
this poor-emcee, 'scortched-on-scene'.. like a 'eye doctor' wit 'pyro genes'..//-10
I'm not your average-fiend, My 'deliverys explosive', like a 'package-from-over-sea's'//-11
I'm like a Sergeant Marine the way I 'put you down at-ease'//-12
I'll rip out ovaries, only time you'd be considered a sick f*ck spittin ill as f*ck is gettin a 'dome-disease'..//-13
ay Dev, we so heavy wit lyrics, it's ground breakin... sh%t .. we're even CLONIN-DE-FEATS!// -14
Treatin 'em like slaves and straight OWNIN-EMCEE'S!//-15
See.. I'm spittin 'hotter joints' than 'KNEE-ON-LIGHTS'..//-16
leavin ur sight see'in nothin but 'stars' like when Deon-fights//-17 I 'feast-on-mics', like Holyfields dreams-at-night...//-18
Hey, you'd think 'Dred' was a 'wrestler' the way he pinned all your rights//-19
wordplay
Ayo I'mma clap this cheesy b^ch like a sandwhich//-20
leavin a messy damage... hold a AERO to ur head, and f*ck up ur your DYNAMICS//-21
damn-kids look lost, or some sh%t .. i got my audience see'in AKWORD-A-LOSINS//-22 (illusions)
I'm knockin-wit-contusions, lockin-these-two-kids in a mirror of blockins, leavin u like a CONFUSED-CUBAN//-23 (cube-in)
these 'kids' are 'outta they minds'.. like a-boozed-children//-24 (abused)..
make u lose-feelin, were dark in some spots when were landin our drops, like 'bruised-pilgrims'//-25
damn Dev, can we be any Rawer?.. I laugh in the death of these b^ches.. guess I commited MANS'LAUGHTER'//-26 (manslaughter)
i'll damage ur jaws, baller.. till Your FORCED to dribble a little//-27 breakin your brittle-bones, I gotta tense flow, like a fittle-tone//-28
I'll force my fists through ur 'nipples-home'//-29
we in an explicit-zone, 'roamin' (roman) through, killin these folks like we were creatin anotha 'catacomb'//-30
I'd ask for a 'face-off' if u had-a-dome, but you lost that sh%t on the 'heads up', ur hat-was-blown//-31
See I put more b^ches to sleep then a matress-alone//-32
Finishing Up
I'll stop ya oxygen-flow, I'm known to 'hit hard wit lines' the way I'm 'knockin-this-dope'//-33
have u switchin to a 'deadly style' when battlin me.. or just 'rockin-a-rope'//-34
see I heard Ak enjoys droppin-the-soap.. Dyna calls it 'clean fun'... sh%t now I'm just plottin-to-choke.. faggots like yall//-35
Like magnets on a plaster wall, the fact u make sense at all is false!//-36
Like a rich, sick, explicit with a diss typa b^ch, we winnin this sh%t at any cost//-37
it's like Akwordz is gettin the meanest boss the way he's 'blowin-jobs'//-38
I'm explodin-like-a-bomb flowin with punches that 'hit home' harder than Tysons Mom//-39
the device is gone, ya mouth no longer able to Yawn//-40
I'm done with these kids, they sliced wit more blades than a Presidential lawn//-41
See they gonna be comin at us wit a Bulk-of-writtens, but the fact they 'livin up to they name' is just like a case of 'pulse'-fiction//-42
I'm far-from-quittin once I spark-a-sharp-spittin, this kid is wack, (Dred bit off you?) since when u hear of a SHARK-BEIN-BITTEN?//~43



===== explenation's =====
LINE 1- Dynamic used to be on this site, supposedly bit off an older MC, "Judge Dredd"..
LINE 2- Akwordz is partnered with a Biter.
LINE 3- Licks = punches..
LINE 5- At the beginning of negotiation of battle, Dyna was tryina find sh%t on me and my partner, so he goes around askin for sites were both on, lol.. immerge.. merging my two terminations over an online tag battle.. terminal.. terminating .. E = electronic termination
LINE 6- COMPLEXED LINE.. Subliminal means like an act under a certain contious.. doing it because of something above u in a way.. hard line
LINE 9- REDSKIN.. chief.. get it?
LINE 12- At ease is a rest position in military, mets used as.. putting them to rest...
LINE 16- KNEE-ON LIGHTS.. = NEON LIGHTS.. KNEE = JOINT
LINE 17- "Stars" = Dallas Cowboys.. Deon Sanders..
LINE 18- feast on mics.. mics like dyna'mics' and... mikes like Mike Tyson.. when he bit Holyfield, so I reversed it, so holyfield is wishin to bite tyson..
LINE 19- Dred being a wrestler.. PINNING = PENING.. his RIGHTS = WRITES.. since dynamic bit dred.. see?
LINE 21- AERO-Dynamics
LINE 22- seeing akword illusions..
LINE 23- put the kid in blocks.. confusing them like a CUBE-IN = CUBAN..
LINE 24- out of their minds like ABUSED children, or boozed, like drunk kids, lol.
LINE 26- laughing at death.. mans-laughter = manslaughter
LINE 29- nipples home = chest
LINE 30- (COMPLEXED) Roamin = roman, catacomb = underground cemetary in ROME..
Line 33- hittin lines, knockin dope.. = cocaine lines..
LINE 34- rockin a rope = deadly style = hanging him
LINE 38- Boss... blow jobs.. losing jobs.. sucking bozack
LINE 42- Pulse fiction = pulp fiction... living up to their name? no.

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