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06-13-03, 09:43 PM | #1 | |
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B.R.E. Presents: "Incomplete"ft/ Affiliate
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heres a lil quick keystyle cuz im bored...
for those who dont know this is about a struggling, straving rapper "Incomplete" [A2Z] My rhymes take careful planning, hours of shit to think// On the brink of insanity, no rhymes just dishes stacked in the sink// No job, no money, no girl...just blood sweat and ink// Hands shaking, voice cracking, eyes hardly seeing// Glowing red, my being Writers Blocking and ODing// I need to be eating, but my minds disagreeing// For the time being, Ill be sitting here guarenteeing// That sooner or later some shit will hit my pad// Then my platinum CD will come, ill be glad that i had// The power to show i was worth something..screw my deadbeat dad// Posing for ghetto shoe ads...fuck being a high school grad// Wait, get back to the rhymes... we need some food to eat// Rapping elite, but I spent my last dollar to buy this beat// So I need to excrete all the pain from my sould and the street// Write it on this paper...my ticket to dough is this sheet/ Fuck being a discrete street rapper, ill be banging the concrete// Set my pen down... shit my verse is incomplete// [CRYING SOUNDS] [Affiliate] this sheet is incomplete but so are my thoughts i was gonna write somethin meaninful but now i forgot so i sit here n hope the thoughts come back soon but i always get distracted from this writin mood i've been scribblin thoughts down for 2 years now: few tears plowed, i've witnessed a few cheers now: still my days seem empty cuz before dis drugs kept me: consumed and confused so i didnt care, drugs spent me: now i'm lucky i stopped but past thoughts still bug me: still hug me makin the present glow seem a bit fuzzy: why cant i have money n be worth somethin to myself: wont stop smokin even tho i know its bad for my health: shit, back to da notes on pad, damn short attention span: discrations around me keep me from my attempted plan: i wont stop, cuz i cant stop till my debut album droppin: even then the demands for more outta me'll keep me hoppin: feedback from listeners will boost my low self esteem: it'll stop me from relapsin so i stay fresh n clean: i look back at what i wrote n it just doesnt seem right: my flows incomplete, thoughts now obsolete, jus doesnt seem tight: a little something something...holla at me if ya wanna collab on this with me, pm me with a verse Last edited by A2Z : 06-14-03 at 11:42 PM. |
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