battle from before, cept set up the RIGHT way.....vote, vote, vote

Green Dreamer Verse :

Are you even eligable to compete for real and be a true MC? :: You Comitte lyrical crimes and bite the same lines that were stolen from me//1
Soon youll be to scared to battle and youll have to much tention :: Your in my class now bitch, sit down and pay attention//2
Ill teach you my own lessons and youll be askin different questions :: Like all the other people that bit and all the other confessed ones//3
I joined this site a week ago and im still kickin ya ass :: I gave you a chance but im comin to fast//4
We all know you a joke, Prewritten all ya verses and are tryin to make solar elipsed known :: You couldnt get a deal even if you tried, so pipe down your unequipted tone//5
But even ya prewritten shits wack, No facts, you cant hack it :: You so outta tactics, i need to keep askin whats ya status//6
Ya heads narrow minded, if this was a recording id rewind it :: Im sry i gotta Laugh, im tryin to check ya flow but i cant find it//7
We know deep inside you cant handle it, You know ya gonna loose :: Take your post and dismatel it and hit me back when ya true//8
Take them silly ass rhymes back cause they dont flow to a beat :: Ya flows so wack, its like the goodbye song from sesame street//9
So im out, its over, im already heated :: This was a waste of time, the only reason i battled ya ass is cause you cheated//10



Solar Elipse Verse:

You think I cheated? Bitch my flow is original, it hits hard and it hits true :: dont step to my plate, thinkin you can BITE off more than you can chew // 1
This shit got more punches than diseased dogs have fleas:: time my rhyme bombs that quake knees, givin you suicidal tendencies // 2
You ass fiend, ill give you more than just bad dreams :: go back to plannin your homosexual Green Dream Team // 3
This battles a joke, the rhymes are one-sided :: Your verses has less flow than my verses divided // 4
Like a russian rocket, ill blast off and kill you quick :: You sweat me more than a suana, suckin my lyrical dick // 5
Crack you in more pieces than a crackhead makin drug trips :: Unlike Robin Hood I dont unload quivers, but unload clips // 6
Like a baby toy, Ill rattle you, expose your greatest fears :: spit sound venom that'll make blood burst out ur ears // 7
Your queer to think you can take me, you want beef :: Fine, Ill smoke ya like a steak, garnish you with a dead leaf // 8
(inspiration from what im goin )
Like an indian chief, i inspire MCs rhyme desire with my battle crys :: your sound pollutions puttin a tear between my eyes // 9
This battles over, no cheatin went down in this game :: anyway, it'll end the same cuz nothin changed my mind's frame. // 10



vote on the best verse.....thanks. peace.

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