I battled this dude, MoRbId, yesterday and I lost. I don't know why. Can someone tell me what's wrong with my verse? Here...

MoRbId, you sound like a poor kid
I should send your fuckin ass back to abortion
before I rip you up into tiny little portions
and grill you up so your momma could eat you up like horse shit
My rhymes are so raw once I spit them in your mouth it'll taste like medicine
giving your skin a 2nd degree burn to disintegrate your skeleton
like a Salmonella virus leering at your organs and meltin[infectin] 'em
just like how I fucked up each of your relatives
You look scared as fuck as if I threatened you like I'd beat your ass down in Maine
You can't relate to my shit, and have no one to blame
cuz when I win this battle you'll be doing the "Walk of Shame"
Fuck it, I already know your gonna choke before you say what you say
So spit motherfucker, so I could be the victor of this game