i'll young if this was a freestyle battle this would have been great but it's text you've got a improve your wordplay
your best l.ine was Im ~comin-at-him~ like a ~live-landmine~ on ~enemy-lines~//
I'd ~knock-dis-kid-out~ witout even using my ~"punch"lines~//
to me



Gay fag, in fact you fudge pack till yo eye alignment is no longer intact/1
I reacte to yo last track and retract my hand back and proceed to slap this cat/2
The only way you progress in sex is yo drunk sister possessed to iscest/3
The slugs you catch yo dumb ass had to study for a blood test/4
I found you brain and smashed-it, as if there was more than a fragment to smash shit/5
If you had a chance you past-it, you couldn’t spit hot if you gargled with acid/6

that hole thing was flow well liked it better the ill younge
lol you won this but please improve yor stacture