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I don't know how to call a battle and this is my first piece I have written ... And I didnt know where to put this at so I put it up in Open Mic...Please tell me wut you think of it, i dont care if its good or bad, just please tell me what i need to improve on ... and if you wanna battle me, message me and I'll go hardcore...Peace
I’ma prove right now I’m the baddest chick Be known as ‘LiL J’ wit da ma-j-ic clit Listen to mah rhymes and listen closely you mutha fucka I’ma rip you so hard, you gonna wanna start fuckin otha brothas! I called you out, hopin for a battle I ain’t lookin for a comedy show, I ain’t lookin for a tattle But shit, this battle was over before it began I’ll be hearin ya spit rhymes as you try to write as fast as you can Come on! show me what ya got fo me tonite Bring yo hottest shit, don’t matter if you black or white You can take my rhymes, and lyrically disagree But fucka you the one thas gon be rated wit a 3 I’m sick of all these boys, rappin about their hoes Rappin about their bitches, rappin about what they don’t know Fucka I ain’t a bitch, I’m just a fine girl Tryin to make it, in this big bad world I ain’t number 2 I’m only number 1 I’m spittin this shit, always havin fun Now I’m gonna bounce, and listen to yo riddle ryhme Peace out, I’m done with you, its over, you just a waste of time
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