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"Clear To Me"
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This is my first love poem that I ever wrote...Its kinda simple...just please tell me what u think...
I remember when our love was strong and real When your smooth gentle hands were all I wanted to feel Wanting to hold you close through every season And when I fell in love, I wanted you to be the reason We peomised each other we would be faithful And never would we become suspects of each others betrayal But lately I have noticed how certain things have changed Now I think my future isnt really arranged You no longer kiss my cheeks and hold me close to you And I no longer feel like our love is pure and true your eyes seem distant now, you seem so far away It's like you never listen to a single word i say I have consulted friends and family about our situation They say if we fall apart, thats destinys creation We are spending more time alone, than we are together It almost seems like we havent hugged or kissed in forever Even when im lying next to you, I feel like im across the sea Our love is no longer there, and thats become clear to me |
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