aight. White virus. Your Ryme scheme was Ok. It sounded
pretty simple, but thats ok if your Punches hit Right. You started
off good with your first few lines, then i saw a few Fillers in the middle that werent strong at all in my opinion. Over-all
your verse wasn't bad, but it could have been worded alot Better.
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Knox. your punches were better. ryme scheme was better
with multies as well. Some of your lines coul;d have used a little bit more work for flow but over-all NIce drop.

vote-Knox..
Sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB..


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