BREAKDOWN

crip man all those ~ don make it a good verse.....it juz lengthens it an makes peps not like it as much...we aint dumb
fav lines:you ~came~ weaker than ya bitch when ya ~fucked her~
i'll beat ya to da point ya speech is slurred. ~fucked wit ya eyes~ like ~magic tricks~ now even ya vision is blurred.//3
it was good but not to impressive

other kid- also nuttin to amazing, but i thought overall urs had beda kick to it...*shrugs* more constant in ya flow an such
fav lines-Erasin Shit Ya Spray Leave Ya Blanked Lyrically Scorch This Kat Cos i Blaze With Shit I Say // Bar 1
Ya Punches Couldnt Stick If Ya Hands Were Soaked in Glue Ya Choake n Spew Like Happy Meals Handed By Hitler' To Provoke His Jews //Bar 2

all in all both could use some elevation but i gotta vote fo that toxic kid