alright heres how it goes down:

Born had some good wordplay, but flow was a little off...the rhyme scheme is kinda weird at times. Sometimes ull rhyme off two lines, and sometimes ull have 2 rhymes in one and 2 different ones in the next. Punches were decent, not bad but not exactly great either...no personals, but its kinda hard when the guys a newb and nothings know about him.

Cryptic, you came out with a much shorter verse and when i saw that i thought ur screwed kid. Wordplay wasnt nearly as complex, but flow was normal. Punches were good, got some personals in there that hit even though they were so short. So you got him in flow and punches and personals.

sayin this, i think cryptic took it...i dont know if hes a vet or what, but keep it up...ur only gonna get better. Vote = cryptic. peace.....

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