Basically this is my first rap, I just wanted to try to tell a story for my first rap. I'm guessing it's the most fundamental part of a rap so I thought I can work on those skills first, then work on rhyming, structure etc etc.

One thing..my real name is Franjo. But it's not pronounced Fran-joe. It's pron: Fran-yo. Just thought I'd let you know since I
use my name in my rhymes. OMC stands for Online MC.

FranjoBalls'

Ya'll think your hardcore..check yo self at the door/
Yo This is my first rhyme, Im jus tryin to tell a story, already possessin' the power and the glory/
OMC FranjoBalls, on tha block....that ya can't stop..all ya'll can taste the 17 shots from my glock/
cause it's pointed..towards your head with no hesitation to see you dead/
But don't mis-undastand, I don't like violence only when it benefits FranjoBalls bank balance/
Franjo got a brain, with a big set of balls, ain't windin up like pops in da pen, busted sellin drugs to an online cop\
Nigga got 5 years...no parole more importantly no MSN silly fool ain't gettin no bitches in his bed.

this nigga at work gettin paid, ya'll broke bitches can't even get laid/
Franjo at work simply illin...secretary readin my rhymes...she know i be winnin,
phone rings..ex-ten-sion 227.."Yo Franjo you a OMC" I say damn rights girl...who's dat on line 3?