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Old 09-17-03, 01:34 PM   #1
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Time Before Shit Happened

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Hold on tight as i invite you back to a time before pain/
Before my homie Jake got mowed down by that train/
Before me and Jamie stood outside it the rain, petrified and scared of lies of getting caught again/
Before the police were on patrol in our hood/
Before the good name of Brokka was dragged through the mud/
The ground where we stood, as we laid little Jonny to rest/
Before that time/
Long before i was obsessed, with the world of the rap game, the world of Tupac/
Before it didnt really matter if you were white or black/
Before i got into drugs, before i was hunted down by the law/
Before i became so drunk i just lay on the floor/
For the first time, Before i penned my first rhyme/
Before i put one perfect toe way outta line/
To before i was born, or even expected/
Before i came into the world and on my way out rejected/
Before i was infected, by all the hate and the shit/
Before i knew the expression of 'bricking it'/
Before i had love for my family, or even knew them at all/
Before i had eminems picture plastered to my wall/
I cannot remember this far back, but i know for certain it must have been whack/
Because if i was there why didnt i care what had happened?/
To the start of the world, thats where i'm taking you back to/
shit started the minute humans walked the earth, it aint new/
So think of us all when your feeling sorry for you/

moral: everybody goes through shit, always has, always will, theres no way to avoid it, shit happens.

I know it wern't the best thing i've ever written but it was a shot, it didnt take that long to write, n e way i'd be glad of some feedback y'all, help me improve and be on the way to uppin this shit.

peace and love ~REPLY~
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