Aight yall, im a 14 yr old kid, so my vocab aint that good, but check it out, i wrote this yesterday at school...my first post.....
yo,yo

As Im sittin here spittin my rhymes on and on/
I realize im stuck with everyone else, a wannabe, a pawn/
I realize im at the heart of my rap skills, im tryin everything, but nothin is happenin/
Im showin more balls than a lot kids by postin this, so if someone makes fun of me ill cap him/
Cause all i want is a chance to get better and hopefully spit hot flows/
I just want feedback cause its what people think that depends how far this shit goes/
I dream of the day when ill be able to grab the mic and all i hear is "ooohhhh"/
I know i aint a pimp, gangsta, or even a thug/
but im still facin problems, im still fallin in this hole that ive dug/
my parents think im shit, my grandma insists im on drugs/
but no one can stop me, i cant quit, no matter how many people are against me/
its not my fault im here cause the devil sent me, but i still question how good my future can be/
i wanna be the next hit, possible the best ever/
but that comes with hard work and increasin talent, so i wanna hear people to make my rhymes more clever/
im devoted to rap, their wont be a day when i dont love it, the odds of me quittin are never/
if u dont like my shit close ur eyes cause i aint puttin my shit to a hault/
my rhymes are blazin, they burn my mouth like mixin hot salsa and salt/
u may say im wack, but there is one thing u cant take away, and thats my pride for puttin up this post/
im just havin fun and postin shit to improve my talent, no one will ever see me boast/
im scraficin everything i own to get better, and i guarantee thats more than most/
right now i need somethin over my bed of rhymes, to blanket the cold, somethin like cover/
when i signed myself up at this website i was thinkin i wanted one thing, respect from others/

peace.....