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09-27-03, 12:45 PM | #1 | |
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This is my second time writing an open-mic....
I am trying to take on a new style so I want peoples opinions on this.........If you think its wack....tell me what to improve on etc. If you think its dope........Great .....But please be honest Uh,these sacred scriptures Remain playin' in your brain like Holocaust pictures Slayin' the airwaves with raps Amplified by hater-stricture Spittin' slick rhymes designed to quickly hit-ya Leavin' ya disfigured like that Mister Mister Blessed with an evil demeanor That'd make the Grim Reaper Jump outta his seat with fear from my lyrical-feature Im Bringin' the heat from beneath ya I guess that oughta teach ya Not to fuck me,the evilest of elite creatures It may seem unfinished but just give me your views on those 12 lines |
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