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10-04-03, 11:26 PM

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AHA! somebody with a little bit of brain....

I feel this feed! man i knew that middle section needed tweakin... i done wrote this shit in 20 mins.... yes! I AM Vindicated!

oh and personally i thought the end was strong but it does have a difficult flow to read so im sure you think it didn't work... so no worries..

thnx

{Peace}

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Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.

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