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Old 10-06-03, 01:20 PM   #16
MeNTiLL
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Dope drop man...This piece was ill in all aspects in my eyes...Imagery...Story Tellin'...Inner Rhymes...This piece had all of that...I caught on to the flow so I don't see wat the others was talkin' about...The inner rhymes really mad the flow dope...

The part that stuck out to me the most was...

years unsettled then the contrasting tangent showing a glowing man
I didn't recognise myself at firsthand then I saw kids and wife in happy expanse
She was beautifull I met her in rehab…and the rest was histories secret
I tried to enter mirrors deceit glitch but the fake portal grabbed a shard stabbing deepest


I thought those lines were dope...But this was a dope drop all around...Keep it up...Peace
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