The other two pieces are kinda old but this piece I just wrote
yesterday so I would really like some feedback.


I can't remember when life was easy,
I can't remember when life left me.
I've been dead for quite some time.
My body still here, but my soul they can't find.
Walk around with nothing inside my head,
Open my eyes, feel the tears I can't shed.
The bills piled up, depression set in.
Why, oh why did this happen again.
Thought I was in the clear, it was just another game,
I just became happy, and now it's the same.
Chop off my hair, this reality still mine.
Life isn't fair, I slept through my prime.
All I think are wicked, wicked thoughts,
About me and my parents , about how we fought.
Seeing my past clearly, through a naked glass.
I can't look away, body broken a glued to a cast.
The friends I've lost, The family I mourn,
I just can't rest my insides are torn.
I smile everyday just knowing that its fake,
Inside I'm not smiling, how much can I take?
If a snake bit me, I would not die.
Completely numb now, my life was a lie.
If I could start all over I'd try to fly straight,
Still it would get me I know thats my fate.
People still hurt me, and I still cry,
I have been looking but I can't find out why.
The end will come sometime, maybe this year.
But I am not here, so I've nothing to fear.

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