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OLI_DOGG 5 100.00%
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Old 10-15-03, 12:51 PM   #16
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Oli Dogg

1st of im'a say fuck you *billabong*,
cus ill roll you up and smoke you, like dem stoners cheek and *chong*(up in smoke),

you came on to rb showing of dat branded *name*,
you cudnt play sports at school cus you got no *game*,

listen boy i dnt giv a *fuck*, ill fuck you *up*,
people respect me on this site bitch, so good *luck*,

so unlucky dude i jst murked u *bitches*,
and i wudnt post your battle cus ull have people in fuckin *stitches*.

Dont *outline* your *punches*. your shouldn't have too.
Lots of Boring and Used concepts.total=3/10
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billabong


here me out
nigga u call your self a rap haha//
you should be on jeny jones with that kinda shit//
your raps r no good they sound like shit on a slong//
aint nothin wrong with billabong//
go back to where u came from bitch//
u aint not thug//
my punches punch harder than mike tysons punches//
bitch u betta back da fuck up unless u wanna get fucked up//

All i can say is this is very bad. Ryhme scheme was off.
punches were played.last line was horrible.total=0.5/10
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Vote=Oli
 
 


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