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10-29-03, 06:12 PM | #11 | |
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aigh't was an ok drop. like Masta C said try to cut down on the length of your lines a bit but it was ok got a good rhyme scheme and some ok multi's but try to play on ur words a bit to (wordplay) but I say u's in. and also ausrotten drop a verse in here or hook us up with a link to one of ur open mics or battles.
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