Both of these rhymes were nearly jaw-dropping in their illness.

I look forward to eventually facing one of you for the title.

Someday.

Chrit...

Great three parter...
Reflecting different feelings, emotions, regret, and outlook on life, lord, dying, and afterwards...
The only thing I would have upped is the vocab, some good stuff, but mostly everyday words...
Still, the high dollar vocab didn't make or break this rhyme.
This was truely bad ass, my man.

9/10

Auspicious (Thug Whyte is it? Too many names you guys have!)

Great emotional piece. Didn't find you looking for sympathy at all with it. If anything, ya givin sympathy to the poor bastard's situation by telling his story.
Some stories are tragic and sad, so what?
Doesn't keep em from being good, though.

9/10

So, how do I vote?
I wanna call em both even and leave it at that, but that would be pussy.

So...

I'm gonna go with "diverse talent" here and vote Chrit.

Simply cuz he had those three different viewpoints...

That was pretty remarkable to relay different opinions and beliefs and make it work and read so well.

Outstanding, Chrit.

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