emotion showed some great emotion (lol)... whole verse flowed well, and it was a nice topic u chose.... ur flow didnt rhyme at the end of each line, but it rhymed internally, and thats hot stuff in my opinion... vocab needs work, and actual rhyming could be better, but is still top stuff.... the main thing that stood out was your dope wordplay.. some of the best ive read this week.. nice job, keep writing ill be looking for more stuff by you

8.5/10

check out my open mic "Mind Theory" please.... thanks