first line defintiely had it own tone into the whole poem. You had really great rhymes backed up with the emotions and techinical skill of word structure to really put the reader into the position you were in (if thats possible...) and to kinda feel that pain you were in. Im not usually one who lets emotions fly easilybut i will say that those words aren't somethin you just "hand out" to just anyone. Its so sad to hear they lose meaning becuase someone left there mess behind on your heart. lemme just say this, when and if i ever say it i mean it, and you wont see it by just my words but my actions too. Awesome poem though, really intense and got me thinkin bout things.
P-diddy